Thursday, August 18, 2011

Lyin'



Do you remember the lion story? Well it's back to being all I can think about. I think this is going to work this way. I have it mostly drawn out, it's gonna be 16 pages. I know I'm going to have to go back in and tweak the grays because I've got like 90% grays next to 95% grays and that is never going to print or even be visible on anyone's screen but mine.

Let me know if it doesn't make sense, my challenge is to tell the story first without relying on the words, because I am in love with the words and it's never good to be in love with anything you make because it will ALWAYS HURT YOU.

3 comments:

jamestryingtocloseblog said...

It looks awesome so far. the three hands in the key panels look more like they are elegantly displaying the key instead of clumsily ramming it towards the lock?

But yeah, I really like the poses when she's tripping on her heel, and the strong wi-fi coming out of the dumpster.

Nikki DeSautelle said...

Thanks for the great feedback! I see what you're saying about the hands, I agree.
Now I can only see wi-fi. It should probably just be 3 straight lines like I have in other places.

Maria Filar said...

i am excited to see the words. also, people at city bird said hey and that you're great.